Proposed amendment to Roles and Responsibilities Policy re Resellers

From:              Mike Henderson
Received:       11 December 2014

In my view, the current draft of the introductory paragraph in 3.15 contains an infelicity of phrasing.

“... Resellers are required to meet the same obligations and standards as registrars in their dealings with domain names and registrants and registrars will be responsible for …” has rather more ‘and’s than is helpful.

Perhaps the sentence could be improved by the addition of a comma after “registrants”: “... Resellers are required to meet the same obligations and standards as registrars in their dealings with domain names and registrants, and registrars will be responsible for …”

I think it would be better to split it into two sentences: “... Resellers are required to meet the same obligations and standards as registrars in their dealings with domain names and registrants. Registrars will be responsible for ...”